读后续写复习资料

读后续写八步成文法
(注意：这八步并不是固定的，可以不按这个顺序，也可以省略一些环节。)
1. 情绪------情绪描写。从原材料中体会作者相应情绪，借助情绪的延续，以此为衔接，续写。
2. 细节-----进一步描述。
3. 转折----个人的努力或者借助外界的力量，使事情发生转折。
4. 转机-----事情似乎有了转机，让人抱有希望，心理能感到安慰。
5. 失望----问题仍然没有解决或者又出现了新的问题。
6. 想法----面对没有解决的问题或者新问题，突然有了想法或感触。
7. 结局-----在想法或感触的影响下，事情有了最后的转折/转机。
8. 点题-----呼应前文
1.情绪：情绪描写 & 2. 细节：进一步解释描写
万金油：1.sb be overcome/ overwhelmed by a feeling of 情感名词，表示某种感情
恐惧：1.He was overcome by a feeling of fear, hands trembling and eyes wide open.他被恐惧冲昏了头脑，双手颤抖，眼睛睁得大大的。
羞愧：2.I was overcome by shame, my heart beating/thumping and my face blushing.我被羞愧冲昏了头脑，心砰砰直跳，脸色泛红。
伤心 3.They were overcome with sadness, tears streaming down their faces. 他们伤心欲绝，泪流满面。
激动：4.I was overcome with excitement, my heart racing rapidly and my eyes shining/twinkling wildly.我被激动的心情冲昏了头脑，心跳加速，双眼狂闪。
开心：5.He was overwhelmed with joy,his eyes shining and face beaming.他喜出望外，双眼炯炯有神，脸上洋溢着笑容。
愤怒：6他非常愤怒，眼睛瞪着我，愤怒地跺着脚。He was overcome with anger/rage, his eyes glaring at me ,stamping in anger .
紧张：7.I was overcome with a feeling of anxiety/nervousness, my heart beating wildly and my legs shaking/trembling badly我非常紧张不安，心跳加速，双腿颤抖。
8: with butterflies in my stomach , i breathed deeply.
惊讶 ：8.她呆住了，惊奇地张大了嘴巴.sb was rooted/frozen to the spot, open-mouthed
9She was overcome by (a feeling of ) surprise/astonishment , open-mouthed ./staring at me with wide eyes .）瞪大眼睛看着我）
尴尬：10I was overcome with a feeling of embarrassment , my face turning red ./flushing .
2.A feeling of 情感名词 welled up inside sb
内疚：11.A feeling of guilt welling up inside me , i lowered my head , admitted my mistakes and apologized to him
一种内疚的感觉在我内心涌动，我低下头，承认自己的错误，向他道歉
感动 ：12She put/gathered her arms around me tightly, with tears welling up in her eyes.她紧紧地把我抱在怀里，眼泪涌了出来
13With tears streaming down his face, , he ran to his mum "s warm hug ,smiled and said gently , “ Mum, thank you .”..
绝望：Tony was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and sank into hopelessness. (被投入黑暗之中；陷入绝望)
失望：14 Overcome with /by a feeling of disappointment at failing to win a prize , he locked himself up in his room..
15My heart sank to the bottom the instant I saw it
满意：16 The moment I finished the speech, all my classmates cheered up with wide eyes and burst into thunderous applause, the teacher nodded with satisfaction and thumbed up.
3.（doing sth ，）Sb felt a great sense of 情绪 welling up in sb’s heart and surging through sb 某人感到一股强烈的情绪在内心升腾，奔涌
好奇17.Burning with curiosity , she ran after the rabbit .非常好奇，
骄傲、自豪pride 18 My heart burst with pride and there was a big smile on my face
1)如释重负.sb let out /.breathed a sign of relief = sighed with relief松了一口气
19We all breathed a sigh of relief when he left.
20 A feeling of relief washed over her.她有种如释重负的感觉。
21Finally telling the truth was a great weight off my mind. 最后讲了实话使我如释重负。
叹气22:She was frustrated and let out a sign with a gloomy cloud taking on his face
3. 转折：个人努力或借助外界
解决冲突的具体方案基本如下：1.encouragement(某人的鼓励) 2.comfort(某人的安慰) 3.inspiration(突然灵机一动) 4.effort(自己的努力训练)5.calm(冷静思考) 6.kindness(某人的善良) 7.courage(勇敢)8.love(爱心，需要与move(感动)和patience(耐心)等适当结合) 9.help(及时帮助)(当然解决方案并不限于某一种，还可以是以上多种方式的结合)
鼓起勇气；他人的鼓励 Sb pluck up/take/gather one’s courage (to do...)
毫不犹豫 (1)sb could hardly w ait to do sth. (2)without a second thought (3)without even thinking (4)without delay (5)without hesitation
4. 转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰
似乎 (1)It was like doing sth (2) It seemed as if that..
希望 (1)hoping that (2)see/feel a glimmer of hope (3)trying hard to do sth.
欣慰 (1)...breathed a sign of relief = sighed with relief松了一口气
(2) (a wave of) relief flooded through /washed over sb.
(3)to one"s relief, ...是人欣慰的/放心的是...
5. 失望：但是问题还未解决或出现了新问题
不幸的是 (1)but bad luck for sb, ... (2) ..., but in vain (3)..., but without success (4)..., but no use
不知道做什么 (1)sb did sth, wondering what to do next. (2)sb did sth, not knowing what to do next.
(3)sb did sth, unsure of what to do next. (4) sb was at a loss what to do.
(5)sb was in a dilemma about whether to do sth or not.
6. 想法：突然有了一个想法（一句话说明这个想法）
某人想到/明白...； 有了主意 (1)It suddenly occurred to sb that 从句 =It hit/struck sb that 从句=It dawned on sb that 从句
(2)(an idea, thought....) came to /popped into sb’s mind
1.(3)one’s mind began to race 4.At the thought of sth , 主谓宾
7. 结局：过段时间，事情有了最后的转折
过了一段时间 (1)not long after that,...=shortly afterwards,... = before long, ...
= It didn’t take long before 从句=It took some time before 从句
(2) for an instant/moment
事情有了转折 (1)To one’s surprise (delight) / Strangely enough, it turned out that 从句
(2)But no second thoughts,...
(3)But what happened next was pure magic.
8. 总结：点题，呼应前文
直到...才意识到 (1)倒装句：Not until then did sb realize/notice that 从句
还记得某人的话；
还在某人的脑海中 (1)One"s word echoed/rang out in one’s ears.
(2)One’s words/voice/song lingered/whispered in one’s mind/ head.
经历与教训 (1)感叹句：What a/an valued/useful//painful lesson sb taught me/sb learned from sb.!
What a/an unforgettable / / interesting / valued experience sb had!
(3)Down deep in one’s heart,...在某人的内心深处Never had they spent such an unforgettable day.
亲情，友情 Laughter lingered in the room.笑声回荡在房间里。
a feeling of warmth and joy welled up in their mind
香气弥漫整个屋子。The scent /smell soon filled every corner of the house ..
认错系列：The twins lowered their head , explaining in a trembling voice ,”
I gathered all my courage and sincerely apologized to him for
He looked into his mother’s eyes ,saying
安慰：
Rose, with a broad smile, patted me on the shoulder , saying in a soft voice :
回忆：memories of joyful time spent with sb flooded back to her .
时间： 马上 in no time /immediately 那一刻 at that moment
然后 and then /after that 不久 after a while /soon afterwards/before long
主题升华：
1.It is love that makes the world go round（是爱让世界运转）and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart
2.I made up my mind to pass on “love” to others（传递爱给其他人）. Just as a saying goes : “ Roses given, fragrance in hand.赠人玫瑰，手有余香
3.3.From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness （希望传递善意）.
4.Sometimes, a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference（会有很大不同）
5.梦想： Never allow reality to get in the way of your dreams 绝不允许现实妨碍你的梦想之路
Where is there is dream, there is life .
补充：
没有想到：Never in my wildest imagination did i ever expect myself to complete the race .
4.环境： suddenly, an ansolute n. ruled the 地点 and a wave of 情绪n swept over /welled up inside sb.
突然一种绝对的..控制了..并且一波情绪席卷了...
5.one’s heart beating fiercely and one’s palm sweating ,an inner voice told sb that 心脏狂跳，手掌出汗，内心有个声音告诉自己
6.luckily, it didn’t take long before sb did幸运的是，他不就就找到了。。
7.Sighing with relief ,she sensed a ray of hope and felt as if the cave had been comforting her 如释重负，他感到一丝希望
细节描写 实例
笑(smile /beam) 看到Tom，Jane高兴地笑了起来。
1)The moment she caught sight of Tom, Jane’s eyes/face lit up with delight.
其他
.2.A big smile spread over their face .(笑)
The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。
高兴激动
delighted/overjoyed , excited/thrilled
名词delight ，excitement
满分短语：1.dance /jump for/with joy 2. be wild with joy 1.①I could hardly contain my delight and danced into the house ..我抑制不住内心的喜悦，蹦蹦跳跳地进了家门
2.When she knew the result of the test, she jumped to his feet with excitement
3.Wild with joy , Rose held Jack ’ s hand and expressed her gratitude to him , “ it is you who teach me not to give up “
4.A big smile spread over their face .(笑)
哭(cry/sob )
流下…的泪水sb shed tears of...
泪水模糊了视线 tears blur one’s eyes / vision
擦去泪水 wipe the tears from one’s eyes
1.Tears /streamed /ran down her cheeks.眼泪沿着她的面颊流下来。
2.Tears well up in sb’s eyes 泪如泉涌
3，I tried to fight back tears. 我努力忍住眼泪
4.A lump came to her throat.她哽咽欲哭。
难过篇： 难过伤心沮丧（sad/depressed/heart-broken）
名词：sadness/sorrow/ depression
one"s head drooped =he lowered his head 低垂着头
1.A feeling of sadness welled up in my heart
2.I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。
3.. with a heavy heart, he walked home. 心情沉重，他走回家
4 Her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks.心痛，眼泪直流
生气愤怒愤怒篇：（angry） anger/rage(n.)
气得直跺脚 stamp one’s feet in anger
怒视某人 glare at sb.
Sb run out of the room in a burst of anger怒气冲冲跑出房间 1.Catching sight of this messy scene, he was seized by a great sense of anger ,his eyes glaring at them
(2)Sam felt so angry that he stormed out of the room, slamming the door angrily behind him.
3.He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.他几乎控制不住怒火。
4.He gave me a look of burning anger.他愤怒地看了我一眼。
感动(moved) ①Touched deeply/, we…被深深感动，我们…
②Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。
③With tears streaming down his face, , he ran to his mum "s warm hug ,smiled and said gently , “ Mum, thank you .”..
4..She put/gathered her arms around me tightly, with tears welling up in her eyes.
她紧紧地把我抱在怀里，眼泪涌了出来
内疚(guilty) guilt A feeling of guilt welling up inside me , i lowered my head , admitted my mistakes and apologized to him
绝望hopeless/desperate
名词hopelessness/desperation
Tony was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and sank into hopelessness. (被投入黑暗之中；陷入绝望)
失望disappointed 名词： disappointment
2.形容词做状语 disappointed , he stepped out of the room.
3.Overcome with /by disappointment at failing to win a prize , he locked himself up in his room..
My heart sank to the bottom the instant I saw it.
焦虑不安：(nervous/anxious /uneasy )
名词
worry /anxiety/uneasiness
踱来踱去 pace up and down
坐立不安 get ants in one’s pants
心跳很快 heart beats wildly
手掌出汗 palms get sweat
1..A flood of nervousness took hold of her, her mind went blank completely so that she could hardly squeeze out any words.一阵紧张控制了她，她的脑子一片空白因此她挤不出任何的话语
3.Overcome by great nervousness, she could feel her hands shaking badly.
4.He was pacing nervously up and down the room
动作： scratching his head , sb said in a low voice ,””
Lowering his head , sb said in a low voice
羞耻/愧篇ashamed（adj）
Shame(n.)
1.So ashamed was she that her face got flushed=Ishe could feel her face burning.（倒装）她是如此羞愧以至于脸红。
=With his face getting flushed , 主谓宾
2. He hung/dropped/lowed/bent/bowed his head in shame.他羞愧地低下了头
惊讶篇：（surprised /amazed/shocked）
名词surprise , astonishment shock
满分短语：1.Much to one’s surprise , 主谓宾 2.动作 in astonishment 惊讶地
3.动作 rub one’s eyes 揉揉眼睛 1.Raising her head in astonishment ,Mrs.Rossi asked in a soft voice/with a big smile , this is quite challenging .are you sure to learn it .（Mrs.Rossi 感到惊讶， 问“这很困难， 你确定不？）
2.sb was rooted/frozen to the spot, open-mouthed 呆住了，惊奇地张大了嘴巴.
尴尬尴尬.embarrassed /awkward
尴尬得脸红flush with embarrassment/one"s face is burnt hot./
sb want to hide in a hole想躲进洞lower one"s head低头 1.So embarrassed was she that she stood therey, feeling the blood rush to her face.(倒装)她很尴尬，笨拙地站在那里，感到血涌到脸上。
2. She scratched her head, hoping to find a hole to hide herself.她搔了搔头，想找个洞藏起来。
3. He bit his lips, not knowing where to rest his hands.他咬着嘴唇，不知道把手放在哪里。
4. All the air seemed to disappear and she felt as if the whole world were watching her.
5. His face flushed/burned with embarrassment.他因尴尬而脸红。
担忧 She gives me a worried look.她忧虑地看了我一眼。
3. She glanced worriedly at her friend.她忧心忡忡地瞥了朋友一眼。
好奇. curious（adj）curiosity (n)
Out of curiosity 出于好奇 We went to the show out of curiosity.
Burning with curiosity , she ran after the rabbit .非常好奇，
满意satisfied The moment I finished the speech, all my classmates cheered up with wide eyes and burst into thunderous applause. The teacher nodded with satisfaction and thumbed up at me
完成演讲的那一瞬间，我所有的同学都为我欢呼，为我鼓掌。老师满意地点头，对我竖起大拇指
骄傲、自豪pride My heart burst with pride and there was a big smile on my face ,
如释重负
2)..sb .breathed a sign of relief = sighed with relief松了一口气
We all breathed a sigh of relief when he left.
2)to one"s relief, ...是人欣慰的/放心的是...
3 A feeling of relief washed over her.她有种如释重负的感觉。
4.Finally telling the truth was a great weight off my shoulders.
最后讲了实话使我如释重负。
叹气 She was frustrated and let out a sign with a gloomy cloud taking on his face
头部动作 ： 抬头raise/lift one’s head 低头dropped/lowered/ hung his head 挠头scratch ones head
1.He dropped /lowered his head in shame .他羞愧地掉下/低下了头
2.My mother stopped her work and raised/lifted her head with surprise in her eyes.母亲停下手中的活儿，惊讶地抬起/抬起头。
3.Scratching his head, tom thought of a good idea .搔着头，汤姆想到了一个好主意。
4.She shook her head in disbelief .她不相信地摇了摇头。
5.She stood up and headed for /towards the exit .她站起来朝出口走去。
6.The teacher nodded with satisfaction . Rosy gave them a shy smile and the applause was deafening .老师满意地点头。罗西给了他们一个羞涩的笑容，掌声震耳欲聋。
脸部face
1.Her face lit up when i gave her the present .当我送给她礼物时，她的脸亮了。
2.Her face flushed /burned with embarrassment 她的脸因尴尬而红/烧
3.His face suddenly grew serious .他的脸突然变得严肃起来。
眼睛eye
扫视 glance at 翻白眼 roll one’s eyes
眨眼 Blink/wink at sb 瞥了一眼 Catch/cast a glimpse of
直视某人的眼睛 look into one’s eyes
看到某物 sb. catches sight of sth. = sth. catches sb’s sight. at the sight of
盯着 stare at.../ eyes fix on.../ eyes glue to...、eyes fall on
目不转睛 eyes never leave sth./can’t take one’s eyes off sth.
目光落在 one’s eyes /gaze / glance fall(s) on sth.
迅速地看某人一眼
焦虑地看了...一眼 shoot sb a ( adj.) look/glance=shoot a( adj.) glance at sb (加形容词即可带感情)
shoot an anxious look
Spot 发现
1.He sat up , his eyes fixed on Rose’s face.她紧盯着Rose 的脸坐起来
2.She spotted Tom out of the corner of her eyes 用眼角的余光看见Tom 走过
3.Her eyes fell on the photos 她的目光落在照片上.
4.With her eyes glued to the phone, it was ...她一直盯着手机
5.His eyes scanned the room as he entered .他进屋时眼睛扫视了整个房间。
6.She looked into his eyes and answered his question truthfully.她直视他的眼睛回答了他的问题。
7.She glanced at he audience ,took a dep breath and began to sing.=after casting a glance at the audience , she ...
她看了他的观众，屏住了一口气，开始唱歌.
As i glanced at jack to see what he was doing, he winkled at me
嘴巴：mouth
1.He bit his lips and could not control anymore .咬着嘴唇
2.She picked up the sandwich and took a bite ..她拿起三明治咬了一口。
会说
补充说 Add 回答 Answer、reply
大声喊 Yell /shout at the top of his lungs 声嘶力竭 小声说 Whisper、murmur
用一个温柔的，坚定的声音、语气 Say in a soft/determined voice /tone 颤抖地问 ask in a trembling voice
Explain 解释 Complain抱怨
1.he said in a soft tone , “i love you.”
2.“ who broke the glass” the boy asked in a trembling voice.
3.
手部动作hand ：1.抓、握 grasp 、hold let go of sth 2,打 hit pat clap /applaud 3 ，摸，抱 touch/embrace/hug
紧紧拥抱 hug tightly 挥舞手臂 wave one’s arms
举手 raise one’s hand
投进某人的怀抱 throw oneself into sb’s arms 用手指 point at
拍肩膀 pat on one’s shoulder 紧抓，紧握，抓牢 take a firm hold of / grab hold of
把某人搂进怀里 Pull/gather sb into one’s arms shrug one’s shoulders耸肩
伸出手 Hold /reach out a hand
放/把手伸进口袋 Place/ reached /slid into one’s pocket
/伸出手 Hold/reach one’s hand
捂住 Cup his hand over tom’s ear and began to whisper
拍手 Clap one’s hands 找到：put one’s hand on
手里紧紧拿着、握着 Held sth tightly in one’s hand thumbs up 竖起大拇指
1.I bent myself down , gave this boy a warm hug and kissed him gently on his forehead .我弯下腰，给这个男孩一个温暖的拥抱，轻轻地吻了他的额头。
2.He slid his hands into his pockets , silently pulled out a pack of napkin and handed it to me .他把手伸进口袋，默默地掏出一包餐巾纸递给我。
3.She picked up a photo ,gazed at it for a while , and placed it carefully into the album.她拿起一张照片，凝视了一会儿，小心翼翼地把它放进专辑里。
4.Jack cupped his hand over Rose’s ear and began whispering his plan.杰克把手捧过罗斯的耳朵，开始低声说他的计划。
5.Grandpa patted me on the shoulder ,held my hands gently and told me not to worry.爷爷拍拍我的肩膀，轻轻地握住我的手，告诉我别担心。
6.My mom gathered me into her arms and whispered to comfort me .妈妈把我抱进怀里，低声安慰我。
7.Jack struggled in the water , waving his hands and shouting ,:”help.”杰克在水里挣扎，挥手大喊：‘救命’。
8.The whole class burst out clapping and cheering ./the class was filled with thunderous applause .全班爆发出雷鸣般的掌声和欢呼声。
腿部动作
.拖着疲劳的双腿 drag one’s legs 跪下 kneel down on your knees
sink /fall /drop to your knees
追逐 chase after 冲 dash
溜进 slip into/ steal into 逃跑 flee away
前往 head for/ to=make one’s way to 加快脚步 quicken one’s steps
跳了起来 Raise/jump/struggle to one’s feet Step into
1.She jumped to her feet when she heared the news.听到这个消息，她跳了起来。
2.He was on his kneels ,searching for the missing ring.他跪在地上，寻找失踪的戒指。
3，.He stepped onto the stage nervously , not daring to look at the audience .他紧张地走上舞台，不敢看观众。